Opening up the inner weakness...

I’ve decided that I’m going to post the current draft of the first two chapters of my novel here.

If you want to read it, just download it and have yourself a field day.

I’m also going to allow comments on it here. Brutal honesty is what I want here people. Don’t lie or sugar coat things. It’s a serious work in progress and I’d like honest gut-reaction feedback.

Yes, it is based in real locations with some “artistic licensing” done to the geography and street names.

*gulp*

Here’s the link...it’s not terribly large. 34 pages and about 258kb. It’s just text ;)

Life's A Beach.pdf