02 November 2005

My novel...

Did anyone read it?

Hell, does anyone read my journal any more?

If you actually did read the first two chapters I posted, I’ll admit that chapter two is rather clunky. I’m trying to fix it up and get it to flow smoother. Anyone have any suggestions? I can’t guarantee I’ll use them, but I’ll certainly consider them.

4 comments:

eyesofaquarius said...

I read.

aadroma said...

Oh you KNOW I read ... I'm not sure how to fix up chapter two, though ...

texaslonestar said...

i read your journal and i read a little of chapter one. i think i got side tracked and forgot about it

bigbearjt said...

It's there. I had forgotten about that link when I was moving stuff around yesterday.